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Nick Winney's avatar

had to get myself a quite space and time to sit and eat this one line by line because its like rubber band ball cut open and ripping itself apart from the inside - fuck knows what its about but I'm in some sort of space ship or alien belly SWAT team taking out the invaders one giant at a time.... or something - Really enjoyed this! like - the images, the speed, the rolling madness of it - I love these brain dumps - just grinning ear to ear and going in for another read. TOP MARKS MY GOOD MAN!

M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

My brain has two settings, cut open rubberband ball or just "n o p e"... Ha ha ha! Thanks, bud, glad you came by for the trip!

Nick Winney's avatar

I live for this stuff - I just cant believe I'm only starting doing it at 55

Nick Winney's avatar

We don't have TANG here - we used to have a thing called TING though - was a sort of would be Jamaican pineapple and grapefruit fizzy drink thing. I think - seems like you rubbed a nerve with it HAHA!

M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

Sonds like the same thing. Ours was a nebulous "orange" drink. I think it's really funny everyone has reacted to the Tang line, getting a real kick out of that!

Nick Winney's avatar

those little touches - can be the difference between great and exquisite

Jon T's avatar

Twitchin’ all over the place. Loved the energy in this. Superb tang.

M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

Thank you! "Superb Tang" would have been a fun title for this :D

Edith Bow's avatar

This was good loved it! The visualizations was great. Loved reading it. I could definitely see it like a film. It almost made me think of Tang which I haven't thought about in years...maybe a decade.

M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

Thank you, I am glad you did! Oh yeah, I'm kind of mad because now Tang is on my mind and I have no idea where/how to get it :P

I think I'm hooked to this sort of exercise now...

Vince Roman's avatar

Loved this. Two different colors on the map.

M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

Glad it treated you well, it's totally unfiltered.

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Jan 28, 2025Edited
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M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

It's a bastard, that one. Hellavu word to keep in your mind! Thank you, that's all I could hope to hear!

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Jan 28, 2025
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M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

Oh yeah, no worries, I knew what you meant 😬