had to get myself a quite space and time to sit and eat this one line by line because its like rubber band ball cut open and ripping itself apart from the inside - fuck knows what its about but I'm in some sort of space ship or alien belly SWAT team taking out the invaders one giant at a time.... or something - Really enjoyed this! like - the images, the speed, the rolling madness of it - I love these brain dumps - just grinning ear to ear and going in for another read. TOP MARKS MY GOOD MAN!
We don't have TANG here - we used to have a thing called TING though - was a sort of would be Jamaican pineapple and grapefruit fizzy drink thing. I think - seems like you rubbed a nerve with it HAHA!
Sonds like the same thing. Ours was a nebulous "orange" drink. I think it's really funny everyone has reacted to the Tang line, getting a real kick out of that!
This was good loved it! The visualizations was great. Loved reading it. I could definitely see it like a film. It almost made me think of Tang which I haven't thought about in years...maybe a decade.
had to get myself a quite space and time to sit and eat this one line by line because its like rubber band ball cut open and ripping itself apart from the inside - fuck knows what its about but I'm in some sort of space ship or alien belly SWAT team taking out the invaders one giant at a time.... or something - Really enjoyed this! like - the images, the speed, the rolling madness of it - I love these brain dumps - just grinning ear to ear and going in for another read. TOP MARKS MY GOOD MAN!
My brain has two settings, cut open rubberband ball or just "n o p e"... Ha ha ha! Thanks, bud, glad you came by for the trip!
I live for this stuff - I just cant believe I'm only starting doing it at 55
We don't have TANG here - we used to have a thing called TING though - was a sort of would be Jamaican pineapple and grapefruit fizzy drink thing. I think - seems like you rubbed a nerve with it HAHA!
Sonds like the same thing. Ours was a nebulous "orange" drink. I think it's really funny everyone has reacted to the Tang line, getting a real kick out of that!
those little touches - can be the difference between great and exquisite
Twitchin’ all over the place. Loved the energy in this. Superb tang.
Thank you! "Superb Tang" would have been a fun title for this :D
This was good loved it! The visualizations was great. Loved reading it. I could definitely see it like a film. It almost made me think of Tang which I haven't thought about in years...maybe a decade.
Thank you, I am glad you did! Oh yeah, I'm kind of mad because now Tang is on my mind and I have no idea where/how to get it :P
I think I'm hooked to this sort of exercise now...
Degloved.
Love that word, love the imagery, love the whole gruesome, slimy slick story you created. I feel like I’ve been coated in something unspeakable.
It's a bastard, that one. Hellavu word to keep in your mind! Thank you, that's all I could hope to hear!
Edited - ‘costed’ should have been ‘coated’ 😬
Oh yeah, no worries, I knew what you meant 😬
Loved this. Two different colors on the map.
Glad it treated you well, it's totally unfiltered.